Tuesday, January 29, 2013

"...Make them Wait": Writing in Serial Form

This week I’ve started posting chapters of my first novel on this blog [no longer available here]. The idea was simply that the blog was an easy way to share this work with others without making a bunch of hard copies. I’ve decided that I’ll do another revising pass on each chapter before I post it, knowing full well that the work is far from finished and needs all the help I can give it before I show it to anyone. That having been said, I’m also working on Novel #2, which I’m really enjoying writing, so I’m a bit slow on revising and then posting new chapters of Novel #1.

That reality became very clear when I received a message from my dear friend Heather saying simply “Chapter 2… Please!”

Somehow that note got me thinking about my process, which oddly led me to think about my favorite author, Charles Dickens, and how he published almost all of his works serially. For those non-Dickens fans out there, most of his works were published in 20 monthly installments of around 32 pages each. This was a fairly common practice in the day, so much so that publishers would often tout the phrase “Make them laugh, make them cry, make them wait!” The benefit to the publication (and the authors themselves) was that it was much more affordable for people to buy the novel on the installment plan rather than pay a larger sum of money up front for a complete novel. Simple economics, right?

Not quite. While I’m sure Dickens was appreciative of the way serial publishing gave him more readers. I tend to think there’s more to the story of why he continued to publish that way. See, an interesting fact about Dickens that sets him apart from many of his contemporaries was that he not only published serially, but he wrote serially as well.

Think about that for a moment. The way I see it, Dickens would write the first 32 pages—maybe even the first 64 pages—and then he’d wait for the reaction of the audience before writing the next installment. If, for example, the audience hated the main character, Dickens could change things up so that an originally more secondary character would take the lead in the next installment. If a character died and the audience took it poorly, SURPRISE! The character wasn’t really dead at all—it just seemed that way! The audience was intimately factored into every one of Dickens’ novels.

I cannot imagine writing that way, being continually beholden to the variability of readers’ opinions. I’d be afraid the final product wouldn’t be mine at all but would be a complicated collaboration with my ideas bending and bowing to others’ input. In practical terms, whose name would go on the cover?

It’s an interesting idea, though, isn’t it? In some ways, I think everything I write is a complicated compilation of everyone I know and everything I’ve heard and experienced. Although I’m not as brave as Dickens, I appreciate the overt way he used the audience to shape his books.

One of my favorite pieces of Dickens’ work is a seldom-read unfinished novel called The Mystery of Edwin Drood. Remember that installment plan? The problem with that modus operandi was that Dickens died with only 6 of 12 planned installments of his final novel complete. To this day, although many have ventured guesses, no one really knows who killed Edwin Drood. Given what I know of Dickens, though, maybe he didn’t even yet know himself.

Sunday, January 27, 2013

To Avoid Avoiding : Robert Benchley & Procrastination


The secret of my incredible energy and efficiency in getting work done is a simple one. I have based it very deliberately on a well-known psychological principle and have refined it so that it is now almost too refined. I shall have to begin coarsening it up again pretty soon.

The psychological principle is this: anyone can do any amount of work, provided it isn't the work he is supposed to be doing at that moment.



("How to Get Things Done," in Chips off the Old Benchley,1949)



I came across the gem above from actor, critic, and comedic writer Robert Benchley today as I thought about why it is that I procrastinate so much when it comes to writing my novel. This has been a continual problem for me, and it’s one that I have never been able to understand.


The real quandary is that I like to write—I may even love to write. I’m not like many of my writing students who whine that they hate writing and therefore can’t determine where to begin. They spend countless hours avoiding the task out of a mix of fear and disdain. On the contrary, for me, there’s nothing like sitting down at my computer and letting a fictional character take me somewhere I didn’t expect to go. Once I start writing, every bit of concern and anxiety I may have had about the bills that need paying or the meeting I need to prepare for disappears as my only focus is recording what is in that character’s mind.


So why do I do everything I can to avoid sitting down at the computer and letting the magic happen?


I don’t have that problem when it comes to my other great love, reading. I’ll curl up with a good book at any opportunity—in a doctor’s office, in the car waiting for a meeting to begin, in the bathtub, anywhere—even if it’s only for a few short minutes. Like writing, reading takes me away from the world I live in with floors to be vacuumed, diapers to be changed, and email messages to respond to. I relish that escape.


Reading Benchley’s thoughts today got me thinking again about my procrastination habit. I have focused my energies thus far in pondering the “why” of my habit. I feed the procrastination monster a bit more as I wonder why it is I just don’t sit down and write. Benchley would probably tell me it’s time to strategize my way around the impasse. I can think of only one surefire way to avoid avoiding writing.

I’m going to go grade student essays.

Saturday, January 26, 2013

I'm Snow Not Bragging...



As you can see from the NASA satellite photo above (taken 1/22/13), it's snowing in Michigan. While that may not seem all that surprising to most people, it’s been quite shocking to those of us living here. See, last year we got very little snow, barely enough for my husband to bother dragging the snow blower out of the garage. Up until this past week, snowfall amounts for this season have been paltry.

To put it frankly, our snow totals have been nothing to brag about. Therein lies the problem. See, here in the great state of Michigan—especially the West side of the state that leans out into Lake Michigan—we enjoy complaining about the white stuff that covers our landscape a large portion of every year. During every snow storm, we call our friends and family to keep them up to date with the ever-increasing totals, haranguing Mother Nature and wondering aloud why we don’t all move to Florida. When the weatherman forecasts a winter storm--especially if the words "lake effect snow" are included--we grin and get ready for an opportunity to tell all of our far-reaching network how miserable we are. When the plows don’t get the roads cleared fast enough, we shake our heads in disgust and then tell everyone we know how smart we were to buy that four-wheel drive vehicle. Snow days for the kids just give us one more way to illustrate to those less snow-fortunate how rough Michigan winters really are.

Let’s face it: We love to complain about the snow, but we love even more to have enough of it to brag about to everyone we know.

Oh, by the way, in case you didn’t hear, according to NOAA, Muskegon had around a foot of snow by Thursday, 1/24, and that’s not counting the additional 6-8 inches that fell across the area on Friday. Not that I’m bragging…